Caspian/Edmund: On The Outside, Looking In

[clovenbuttercup]

Title: On The Outside, Looking In
Character(s): Lucy Pevensie
Pairing: Caspian X/Edmund Pevensie
Rating: T
Notes: My Narnia fic is a blend of film and book elements (broadly speaking this means film casting/setting, and book timelines/dates, unless otherwise specified).  This is set after the battle with the Sea Serpent but before Ramandu's Island.
Disclaimer: Characters you recognise belong to C. S. Lewis.

It’s been weeks since you’ve noticed, but nothing’s changed.

Ed’s all that Caspian can see, and Ed’s the same about Caspian.  Nobody else exists for either of them and although you suspect they know it can’t be healthy for them to be so dependent upon each other, they can't seem to stop: where one of them goes, the other inevitably follows.  They’re almost never seen apart.

But with everything they’ve been through to get them here, and the fact you three know this can’t end the way they wish it could?

You let it go, and don’t say a word.

Comments

[vix-spes.livejournal.com]

*cries*

Oh this was so lovely ... how nice to see them through Lucy's perspective!

[clovenbuttercup.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I'm pleased you like this!

I've been wanting to do something from Lucy's POV for a while; I've a post-Dawn Treader thing rattling around in my head but the muse is being unco-operative so that one might take a while.

[magical-sid.livejournal.com]

The idea to see them from another POV is brilliant! I'd love to see a story from the POV of Ramandu's daughter. All the heartbreak...

[clovenbuttercup.livejournal.com]

The idea to see them from another POV is brilliant!

Thanks; if anyone else would see what lies between Caspian and Ed, it'd be Lucy.  I've an idea or two for another story involving Lucy, but the muse is being difficult.

I'd love to see a story from the POV of Ramandu's daughter. All the heartbreak...

I've an idea or two for that.  I mostly write from Caspian's POV, so doing one from the Star's POV might be interesting; I'll see what I can do, but no promises.

It isn't quite what you asked for, but I can recommend this; it's rated E for the sex but there's angst aplenty (won't spoil it for you by saying what, but it's deffo there.)